Monday, November 23, 2015

Comments for Jamie and Estelle: Jennifer Lawrence

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First, write about something well done.  What did you learn from this group?  What part of the Presentation seemed the best?  Be specific.

Second, offer constructive criticism that would help this group. What might have been more clear?  What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished?  Be specific.

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11 comments:

  1. I thought Jamie and Estelle's presentation was well delivered. They gave good examples for Jennifer's positive and negative influences. Their slides were really good and funny as well especially the one of her in the car from the negative influence slide. The one thing that could have been polished more is info on the negative influences. Even though Jennifer does have much besides her temper made talk about how that temper effects people.

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  2. I thought they both did a great job with the project they were very organized and they new what they were talking about. I think that they spent a lot of time on it and it showed through their presentation. The only thing I would say they did poorly was there was a lot of reading from the cards instead of making eye contact, this is something that is minor.

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  3. I thought that Jamie and Estelle did a great job with their presentation on Jennifer Lawrence. I learned a lot about her both positively and negatively as a person. I thought it was interesting how her family has a charity called, Bellwood Charity at her families farm in Kentucky. I also thought they did a great job dividing the work up evenly between each other. One thing that could have been different was Jamie and Estelle having more confidence in themselves because they did know what they were doing!

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  4. I thought they both did a great job with their presentation. I learn a lot from her types of charities she involved in and how she acts. The quote they had in their presentation was really good. One area where they could have done a little differently is adding a little bit more negative influences.

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  5. Jamie and Estelle's presentation was well done. They did good research and gave out good information. It was cool to find out all of the charities Jennifer Lawrence is involved in.

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  6. I thought that you guys did really well on your presentation. The information was good, you found both positive and negative aspects. I thought that you both could have made more eye contact, but other than that good job to both of you.

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  7. I loved learning about Jennifer she is by far one of my favorite actresses! I thought you all did a great job with your presentation and were very prepared

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  8. Your presentation went very well in my opinion. I know that Jennifer Lawrence has become a big icon of being yourself and you clearly explain the positive impact that she is having on children through he movies, and actions off of the screen. Great Job!

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  9. Your presentation went very well in my opinion. I know that Jennifer Lawrence has become a big icon of being yourself and you clearly explain the positive impact that she is having on children through he movies, and actions off of the screen. Great Job!

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  10. Presentation was presented very well and had tons of good info from the start of her career to now. all i knew about her was that she was in the hunger games but your presentation showed more from her appearance of her self to all the organizations shes with. good job no real critics.

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  11. i enjoyed hearing about both of the positive and negative influences Jennifer Lawrence has. i thought the presentation did an overall great job. i would recommend is practice, you guys mentioned how nervous you were and although you did a good job, you could see the lack in confidence.

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