First, write about something well done. What did you learn from this group? What part of the Presentation seemed the best? Be specific.
Second, offer constructive criticism that would help this group. What might have been more clear? What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished? Be specific.
Post all comments for this group below this post, please, as we all need feedback, and it's valuable.
Natalie's and Ali's presentation was very detailed especially when they talked about the negative influences because they gave good reasons why what Taylor Swift does can negatively influence people. The one thing that I thought could have been better was to give a little more info and take more time on the positives and how they impact people.
ReplyDeleteFor Natalie and Ali's presentation I thought they touched base on a lot of the negative influences she has on kids these days. Something I learned about Taylor Swift was she is viewed as down to earth. One criticism may be they could have talked a little longer and gave more information. :)
ReplyDeleteI think that they did a good job over all they made us aware of Taylors flaws and her great qualities. They didn't persuade me to like her but that wasn't the point of it. I could tell they both like her a lot and they did a great job. One thing I noticed is it seemed that the work wasn't divided up evenly.
ReplyDeleteI thought that Natalie and Ali had picked a great public figure for the project. They gave a good amount of information on Taylor Swift. One thing that I didn't realize was her criticsim for homophobic lyrics. They did a good amount of research for her. One thing I wished could have been different was the length. Their speech was too short but they did give a reasonable size of information when presenting.
ReplyDeleteI liked how they made their presentation layout it was very nice. They did a good job giving us the points where Taylor Swift has positive and negative influences. One criticism I have is it seemed only one person new all the information and it went really fast.
ReplyDeleteNatalie and Ali's presentation was very well done. The information was well researched and to the point. A lot of great information was given.
ReplyDeleteYou guys gave some good information about Taylor Swift, but it may work out better if you divide the information up more evenly and speak a little slower. Other then that it wasn't bad.
ReplyDeleteI thought that the information given was really good. I didn't know that she had homophobic lyrics in her song "Picture to Burn'' I found that interesting. I thought that the work could have been split more evenly.
ReplyDeleteI really liked learning about Taylor Swift I didn't realize some of the things that you all shared. I felt like you guy could have maybe spread the infromation and presentation out a little more evenly. Also maybe talked a little slower to save some more time
ReplyDeletevery good information you had and had facts that were new like the homophobic lyrics. you could have been a little more prepared and spread out your info a little more
ReplyDeleteYour overall information about Taylor Swift was on point, but it seemed like you could have used a little more time trying to piece the information together better. But you made good eye contact and presented very well.
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