First, write about something well done. What did you learn from this group? What part of the Presentation seemed the best? Be specific.
Second, offer constructive criticism that would help this group. What might have been more clear? What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished? Be specific.
Post all comments for this group below this post, please, as we all need feedback, and it's valuable.
I thought christian and Kyle did a good job of telling how Bill Gates has a influence on people. I learnt that Bill Gates has his own foundation with his wife Melinda that helps with diseases and college stuff. The one criticism I would give is that maybe to talk a little more about how Microsoft was created.
ReplyDeleteI think that Christian and Kyle did a good job at giving us a lot of information about how he got started. They were very calm and collective. I learned about him and his wife's foundation that help with people's diseases. The only criticism I can think of is they could have talked louder.
ReplyDeleteThey both did a great job they were very informative about the topic and taught us a lot. I never knew that he would lie to the public about the advances that Microsoft was making. They gave really good background information without having to much information. I didn't find anything about the presentation that was bad.
ReplyDeleteChristian and Kyle did a very good job on their presentation about Bill Gates. I learned a lot about the Foundation Bill and his wife created. They both made a lot of eye contact during their presentation. the only criticism i can think of is sometimes in the presentation the word umm would be said a lot but other than that i cant think of anything else.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the presentation that Christian and Kyle did. The information presented was very interesting and informative. I never new that Bill Gates was accused of innovation fraud and that he lied about the capabilities of certain programs he would released to boost sales. As far as constructive criticisms go, its hard for me to point out anything. The presentation was well presented and informative.
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ReplyDeleteYou guys did a good job with presenting and your presentation was put together well. I was able to learn a lot about Bill Gates that I didn't know. I didn't really notice anything wrong with your guys presentation.
ReplyDeleteI thought that you guys had a lot of really good information. It seemed like you both knew your information, and seemed to be prepared for the presentation overall. I didn't realize that they had scholarships available. I didn't really find anything wrong with your presentation beside maybe a little more eye contact.
ReplyDeleteI really like your presentation! I thought you were well prepared and gave me information that I didn't know about Bill Gates! I didn't think you guys had any problems during your presentation maybe talk a little louder but other than that you both did a great job.
ReplyDeleteI really like your presentation! I thought you were well prepared and gave me information that I didn't know about Bill Gates! I didn't think you guys had any problems during your presentation maybe talk a little louder but other than that you both did a great job.
ReplyDeleteI thought that your presentation was well prepared and you knew all your information. if i had and helpful tips it would be more loud and foreword when you present
ReplyDeleteI thought that your presentation was well prepared and you knew all your information. if i had and helpful tips it would be more loud and foreword when you present
ReplyDeleteYou both did a great job! Bill Gates is someone I was already knowledgeable about, and you relayed the most important information about him and his work with ease. Good presentation all around.
ReplyDeleteI thought you guys did a great job! although ive heard of him, i didnt really kow who bill gates was and you guys did a good job presenting the positives and negatives he has. Great job!
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